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Niya Vaiddh's avatar

Unsettling but a good read. Thanks for writing

Arvind Kumar's avatar

Thanks for reading!

Just here and there 🖋's avatar

Well written...it brought out emotion of helplessness of the mother so beautifully. It was uncomfortable to read but it really depicts reality

Arvind Kumar's avatar

Thanks for reading! Really appreciate your kind words!

Naira lune ✨'s avatar

Keep writing ! To be honest, I have seen it in reality . Reading this was just bringing back that story in my head .

Arvind Kumar's avatar

Thanks Naira! Sadly, such aghast stories are relatable for a lot of people.

Ameliorating A's avatar

This was a very poignant read. I have tears in my eyes at the end. I don't know what to say..this was deeply shocking honestly..

Very well written!!

Arvind Kumar's avatar

Thanks for reading this! I know this is an uncomfortable read, but it still happens a lot, especially in villages.

Ameliorating A's avatar

I agree. It indeed is the reality at several places..

Thank you for writing this honestly. Awareness should be made about such things.

डॉ अर्चना मामोरिया's avatar

अत्यंत मार्मिक रचना, पढ़ कर आंखें भीग गई. बृद्ध अबला मां की ऐसी दुर्दशा करने वाले बेटे भी कभी सुकून से नहीं रह पाते उन्हें इसी जन्म में असहनीय पीड़ा भोगनी पड़ती है.

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Arvind Kumar's avatar

Thanks for reading!